In the wonderful pattern of things you'll get a B+ with regard to effort. Exactly where you actually confused us ended up being in all the particulars. You know, people say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more true here. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what did work. The article (parts of it) can be incredibly engaging and that is most likely why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can certainly see the leaps in logic you make, I am definitely not convinced of exactly how you appear to connect the details which inturn help to make the actual final result. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but trust in the future you link your dots better.