In the awesome design of things you get a B+ just for effort. Where you lost me personally was first in your specifics. As as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more correct here. Having said that, let me say to you just what exactly did do the job. Your text is actually very powerful and this is probably why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, despite the fact that I can easily notice the leaps in logic you come up with, I am not confident of just how you seem to unite the details which in turn help to make the conclusion. For the moment I shall yield to your issue however wish in the future you link the facts better.