In the excellent pattern of things you actually receive a B- for effort and hard work. Where you actually confused us was first on your details. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more true at this point. Having said that, let me tell you what exactly did give good results. The writing can be extremely engaging and that is possibly the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, although I can certainly see a jumps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not confident of just how you seem to unite your points that help to make the final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but hope in the near future you connect the dots better.